Originally Posted by
5JeepsAz
Chills baby!!! Great, a poignant, and sad, scene!
"She knew he was fast by the sound of the cattle guard underneath, whump whomp, danger fast"
"The engine was ticking, almost popping, like the racing of her heart when she past in front of the Jeep to grab her brothers hand. Like it was groaning too, knowing what lie ahead".
C'mon man, the Jeep is less of a cyborg than the robot brother! Give it the character it has, maybe even lines - hell I tell my Jeep secrets!
Honestly, that was touching. Nicely done!